If a word doesn't add to the rhythm or the imagery, cut it. Deep poetry uses a single, sharp word ( Sorkkal ) to replace a whole sentence. 🎭 Imagery through Inflection
Vilagum megangal polae naan Vilayadu veyyil polae naan Thedum thuram engu? Thunbam engu? Thodarum payanam idhu, laya laya... laya kavithai lyrics better
Poetry is about showing, not telling. Remove filler words that make the line sound like a conversation. If a word doesn't add to the rhythm or the imagery, cut it
A poor lyric site would write: "Thulli thiriyum kiliye siragadithu" – losing the caesura (pause) after kiliye . The better version keeps the comma and the line break, showing you where to breathe. Thunbam engu
The font is too small. The timing is off. The background is a distracting stock image of a rose or a waterfall.
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